Hi Siobhan it's Alanna, I really like your poem, it really makes you think about the huge differences between peace and war. I also like how you talk about riding out across the farm and then dragging the gun across the ground. I think your last line is really powerful as well. Good job :-)
Hi Siobhan it's Alanna,
ReplyDeleteI really like your poem, it really makes you think about the huge differences between peace and war. I also like how you talk about riding out across the farm and then dragging the gun across the ground. I think your last line is really powerful as well.
Good job :-)
Siobhan I love the feelings and images your poem provokes. Well done
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